Thursday, 8 November 2007

Our Chicken.

I'm trying out a shorter version of the Pissoem. Please let me know what you think and any suggestions welcome.

Our Chicken by Chopski.

There's a chicken in the house who one day
ate a torch and every now and then
she lights up the night an incredible sight
we think she's a battery hen!

10 comments:

Vi said...

bwahaha! V good!

Now can you do one about fireworks? One that 7yo can read out at school?

Go on, be a good lad and do my sons homework for him!

Kahless said...

HaHaHa!
;-)

The shorter version is good too. What would we call it - a pissoema?

katy said...

having a blonde day had to read it twice before i got it! duh silly me!
yeah it works for me

DJ Kirkby said...

Lol, very good!

Chris King said...

Vi; I can, when do you want it by?

K; A Pisem?

H I; Probably a lot of mileage in blonde pisems!!

DJ; :)

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Casdok said...

Groan!
But still very witty!

Lady in red said...

these have all made me laugh

Chris King said...

P; Ok.

P; Ok.

C; Groan indeed!

L in R; Cool!